Wednesday, February 14, 2007

A Poetic Prisoner - Scene One

Robby: 21 years old, brown hair green eyes and, scrawny build. His hometown is in humble Virginia, where his family and loving fiancé live. Robby got drafted out to the army and is now fighting in WWI on the western front. His fellow comrades see his as a foul, close minded, flake, when he really is shy and self conscious so he maintains this mentality in fear of being considered weak. During a battle he finds himself stuck in a trench behind enemy lines and fears that he will be mistaken for an enemy. So all he can do is sit and wait.

1 comment:

carolina jimenez said...

We are really excited to see how this turns out. We think that you need to explain more of why he decided to go to war. What is keeping him there? What role is he playing in the war? Just some things to think about. We think you have a good character so far!